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Shinku Fukuda |
#9 Love A: longing for his voice I re-read the letter again Ebba (You should develop love more...) B: standing so close under the umbrella I smell his smell Ebba (Same as A. Her arm waas touched, these lovers have to do something more!) C: through the leaves you glance at me then unbottun your blouse Alex (very sensational! A very good male point of view!) D: the tent door flips in the breeze we ignore it Alex (Two lovers in their own world. Very good!!!) E: catching the last flight from Cairo to Rome hoping he'll still be waiting Patricia (I am afraid a gap between the previous link is a bit too much.) F: Maria Callas-- the two of us enveloped in her soaring voice Patricia (two lovers listening to CD? Very romantic and sweet. I wish I had a love affair like this!) G: in the spice bazaar the mixture of aromas heighten our desire Patricia (Only desire heightened? I need more action!?) I liked C, D and F, but decided to select F because F has very romantic element (music). Maria Callas is a very clever choice. Describing the scene without telling much, but in reality, a very sensational love link. Lovers' emotions are going up and up like the soprano's voice...