Fay's tip: Because Alice and Patricia's links are han (self+other), we cannot do 'our' love. We can go back to their/his/her (ta - other), I believe.
#10 A: the gift, a small vase... perfect after last night Alex (In Japan, this type of a link is called *ato-ginu* (after silk). Nine lingering image, but a bit too quiet. B: finding a perfect rhythm in and out of their breath Lynne (Two people are in their heavenly world... Peacefullness after passion...!?) C: the peak of joyous rapture-- then her hair comes tumbling down Lynne (*tumbling down* describes joyous passiona dn develops the previous love link nicely. In Japan, there is a statue of male and femal gods in their joyous rapture.) D: stopped at a scenic overlook for another long kiss Alice (describing what happened a day after, not too closely) E: she says she always sleeps as if he were watching Alice (describing happiness and lingering mood after her lover left. Men cannot write this kind of womanly link.) F: beni hiki-naosu hizakari no heya Fay (afternoon sunshine fills the room/where I re-apply red rouge) (Vivid color of red and love affair in the afternoon. Dangerous love... Good link) G: mofuku no botan hazusu mijika-ya Fay (shortening night/I unbutton my widow´s dress) (A widow´s love affair after the funeral... Where did you get this idea? Reminded me the movie I saw somtime ago) H: dousoukai to itsuwatte deru Fay ("I´ll go to a re-union"/my lie to leave the house) (Moving backward, I am afraid) I decided to select Lynne´s C (joyous rapture) though Fay´s G (widow´s dress) is a strong link, too. I selected two of Fay´s already and I liked Madam Lynne´s passionate, emotional love link!!! Shinku Fukuda